These are the first two pages of a book I've been working on. I pitched it to publishers to no avail but still work on it when I have the time. By the time it's finished, print comics will probably no longer exist. This is the first time I've looked at these pages in a while. I can see now why publishers passed on it.
I saw someone wearing a shirt at the mall the other day that I thought displayed this image. As I got closer, I realized I was wrong. It turns out it was some birds or something and had a stupid slogan on it, "make it rain". I have no idea what it was trying to convey. Anyway, I turned this image into the drawing below:
In hindsight, I think the clouds may be superfluous (and childish as well).